Well i've recently started songwriting as i'm thinking of starting a band (I play guitar) :eek:. I've learned something already, songwriting is actually quite a hard thing to do but, I think i've come up with some reasonable lyrics. These lyrics are aimed at the alt rock/metal genre. I've only come up with the lyrics so far, but hopefully when I can record from my guitar to my pc there should be some stuff that you can hear. Anyway here are the lyrics, see what you think.
Verse
There was a time,
when I was free from
All this pain and suffering,
but now it seems that i'm stricken
And can't find an end to all this grief.
Chorus x1
I can't find my place
I can't figure out
how to grasp my goal
and replace this ever blackening hole.
Verse
I'm reaching out for help
but all you seem to do is push me
back to a dark place that I cannot break
and it's killing me trying
but I know I gotta keep fighting.
Chorus x2
I can't find my place
I can't figure out
how to grasp my goal
and replace this ever blackening hole.
which my soul once fulfilled!!! (2nd time)
Verse
This disease I feel inside
Is destined to leave
now that i've found my absolution
from what once was a stronghold of tribulation.
Chorus x2
I've found my place,
I can feel the fortitude
developing in my soul
so now I can reach my goal.
I've found my absolution!!! (2nd time)
Comment and criticism is welcome :thumbsup: